Awakened
The soul travels deeper
And finds some treasures
Floating in the river
Of eternal bliss.
(This poem is part of the series titled ‘Journey Inward’, where I am going to publish 30 poems on spirituality, introspection and self-discovery. You can read the other poems of this series from here.)
(I’m participating in #BlogchatterA2Z)
(I am also participating in the Global A to Z Blogging Challenge 2025 and the Na/GloPoWriMo Challenge 2025.)
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Compact and to the point! Lovely, Swarnali!
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Love this. Its amazing how you use a few words to say so much, Swarnali. Kudos!
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I love how you explored the different layers of awareness and the connection to the universe. It’s like, we’re all part of something bigger, but also, we’re just trying to figure out our own little slice of reality. Your writing is so introspective; it feels like you’re inviting the reader to join you on a philosophical journey. I’m definitely going to be pondering this one for a while. It’s like you’ve opened up a whole new can of worms in my brain! I appreciate you tackling such a complex subject with such clarity. You’ve got a way of making the abstract feel tangible.
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Eternal bliss. Ah! The ever eluding feel
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I can visualize this river of eternal bliss that you talked about in your poem.
Sometimes, our thoughts, emotions and other treasures struggle below the surface of the water. It is only in moments of peace, when they finally come to the surface, that we find bliss.
Lovely poem. Do drop by mine.
Cheers,
CRD
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[…] Consciousness: Awareness of oneself, others, and the universe. […]
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Short and impressive, Swarnali! How nicely you’ve put such a profound message in this lovely poem.
Esha
https://mysoultalks.com/c-chakras-the-wheels-of-life-atozchallenge2025/
Thank you, Esha! I can’t wait to read your posts. Shall start reading yours soon.
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Exploring our inner selves helps us discover enlightenment from our thoughts. The river of eternal bliss is a lovely metaphor. To achieve this, one must reach a state of awakening. Thanks for the message.
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The Blissful Storyteller 
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