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Dribble #3 – A Mother was Born

The baby stopped crying as soon as Bhumi took her on her lap. The smell of her body, the soft touch of her skin, the sleeping face on her shoulder – Bhumi felt so much peace when holding the little life.

A mother was born. Bhumi proved the doctors wrong.

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(Dribble is a micro fiction where the story lengths exact 50 words. Read more of my dribbles here.)

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Hi there! I am Swarnali. I manifest the power of storytelling as a medium of change. I research on the small acts of transformation that make a big impact in life. Welcome to the potpourri of my discoveries. May you be guided towards the path of peace and purpose.
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6 responses to “Dribble #3 – A Mother was Born”

  1. Dr.Amrita Basu (Misra) MBBS, MS Avatar
    Dr.Amrita Basu (Misra) MBBS, MS

    SO beautifully written. I liked how poignant your written words were.

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      Swarnali Nath

      Thank you so much Dr. Amrita. It means a lot to me 🙂 Thanks for reading and leaving your feedback on my blog.

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  2. Book Vue Avatar
    Book Vue

    Excellent writing, Swarnali!

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      Swarnali Nath

      Thank you so much, Chitra 🙂

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  3. Ambica Gulati Avatar
    Ambica Gulati

    A very profound line! “A mother was born. Bhumi proved the doctors wrong.” When you believe in yourself and the universe, things happen!

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  4. Suchita Avatar
    Suchita

    There is a statue on a highway in Bombay that says a child gives birth to a mother. Your dribble reminded me of that statue. In 50 words you have told a poignant story 🙂

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