The transformation happened overnight.

Once an ordinary man, now a wise sage

Sitting on the steps

beside the river,

he counts the swans flying above,

As if he is busy in a conversation with them –

Asking about their pasts, knowing their names,

Questioning their origins, learning their stories.

The sage is curious to learn about the truth

Where are they coming from

Where are they flying to.

As the fire beside him is never extinguished,

It is set ablaze for every moment on the earth,

The sage sits on the ghat

And keeps conversing with the swans

Until the moment he is transformed into one.

A spiritual poem on transformation

(Swans, especially the “hamsa” or “self,” are linked to the concept of moksha or liberation from the cycle of birth and rebirth (samsara). The swan’s flight is seen as a metaphor for the soul’s ascent towards spiritual enlightenment. In Varanasi, it is believed that the fire of Manikarnika Ghat is never extinguished. A continuous fire has been burning at Manikarnika for centuries. The fire never goes out, symbolizing the eternal nature of the soul and the cycle of life and rebirth. I tried to write a poem by combining these two symbolisms to share my interpretation of the word ‘Transformation’.)

(This poem is part of the series titled ‘Journey Inward’, where I am going to publish 30 poems on spirituality, introspection and self-discovery. You can read the other poems of this series from here.)

(I’m participating in #BlogchatterA2Z)

(I am also participating in the Global A to Z Blogging Challenge 2025 and the Na/GloPoWriMo Challenge 2025.)

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6 responses to “Transformation”

  1. Matheikal Avatar

    Mystical transformation. To become one with the other creatures, what more bliss is required!

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  2. Srivalli Rekha Avatar
    Srivalli Rekha

    I like how you combined those two elements (thank you for the note). Transformation for liberation! Wonderful.

    //As the fire beside him doesn’t refuse to extinguish//

    Do you mean it doesn’t extinguish or it refuses to extinguish? Right now, the sentence has a double negative.

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    1. Swarnali Nath Avatar

      Thanks for mentioning. I was editing that sentence and in between I forgot to delete the previous words. Yes, I meant here the fire of the Manikarnika Ghat. Thanks for reading my poems, Sri. Means a lot.

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  3. A Rustic Mind Avatar

    Ahan, Varanasi makes an appearance again. Love it!
    And loved the symbolism of fire and swans here. The soul becomes a swan once it attains Moksha after death. Wonderful euphemism

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  4. chinmayeecreations Avatar

    The poem totally justifies the spiritual vision that you have tried to put across for the readers. It felt blissful while reading the poem and yes, one can imagine of the Varanasi Ghats while reciting these lines.

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  5. Pandian Ramaiah Avatar

    Life is a long journey. The more we question, the more we become excited; the more we understand the cosmos, and the more we feel a part of it. You made these ideas easy to grasp by using the sage and birds as metaphors. It was so simple, but so evocative.

    Your words reminded me of Bharati’s poem “Nirpathuve”:

    Niṟpatuvē, naṭappatuvē, paṟappatuvē, nīṅkaḷellām
    Coṟpanam tāṉō?–pala tōṟṟa mayakkangkaḷō

    What stands, what walks, what flies-are you all
    Just a dream? Many illusions of appearance?

    Just as the sage questions the birds’ stories, Bharati questions about the very existence of what he see around him.

    A lovely poem. All the best.

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