Not all lovers are destined to unite at the end of their story. Some have the fate of ending their story as a tale of love that is half-finished, half-written, and half-told, because this is how their stories find a home. The more they long for the union, the purer becomes their love, as the fire sets ablaze in a room of darkness before giving birth to a sunflower. Such is the story of Yamini and Vivaswan, who were never apart, yet never together. As it dawns, the dewdrops laid on the grass whisper their story to us.

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Vivaswan was meditating in his room. He was praying to God to reveal to him the light that would guide him toward his purpose in life – seeking answers to his questions and discovering the ultimate truth. The ashram was quiet as it was midnight, and everyone was

sleeping. Vivaswan was the only person in the ashram who was awake. It was the last night in the ashram for him, as he completed twelve years there, and now it was time to return home.

Before going to his village and joining the temple as the new priest, he wanted to devote himself to the quest for the truth and find the answer to his questions. He wanted to meditate, chant, and pray to God, seeking His blessings so he could find his answers.

He meditated for the whole night, and when it was about to dawn, looking at the bluish crimson sky, he screamed to ask the Omnipresence, “How to reach the light? Which path will lead me toward the truth that I have been seeking? How to attain enlightenment?”

This time, he heard a voice as it echoed from the mist, “Sacrifice. Surrender. Devote.”

(to be continued…)

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‘This post is a part of Blogchatter Half Marathon’ .

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11 responses to “Light in the Dark – Part 1”

  1. Srivalli Rekha Avatar

    Oh, I’m intrigued! Star-crossed lovers with a dose of ancient presence and magic.

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  2. Matheikal Avatar

    This promises to be quite interesting!

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  3. Matheikal Avatar

    This promises to be quite interesting!

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  4. Zenobia Merchant Avatar
    Zenobia Merchant

    I love historical and mythological stories and yours seems to be a mix. The first part has intrigued my curiosity. Can’t wait to know how the story unfolds.

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  5. Ambica Gulati Avatar

    Your creativity is amazing. He seeks the light and asks it, yet there’s a love somewhere, away from this sadhana. What a wonderful theme.

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  6. shwereads Avatar
    shwereads

    The first line itself got me into reading more.

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  7. Reubenna Dutta Avatar
    Reubenna Dutta

    Quite intriguing. Would come back tomorrow.

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  8. Writa Bhattacharjee Avatar
    Writa Bhattacharjee

    Love the beginning. Curious to know the rest.

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  9. A Rustic Mind Avatar

    Such an intriguing beginning. The mystery around Vivaswan, the search for truth, and that final message of “Sacrifice. Surrender. Devote.” All of it really pulled me in. Looking forward to Part 2.

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  10. MommyingBabyT Avatar
    MommyingBabyT

    A love story starting with sacrifice, surrender, devote.. seems like a twist coming up.

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  11. Malvika Singh Avatar

    Such an intriguing beginning. I’ll surely come back for the rest of the story.

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